I was actually very iffy about posting this one because it reminds me of one of Jenni tapanila photo's. I even asked her if I could post it! Yeah I know, I'm a big dork. She pointed something out though... everything has been done already anywho. Sooo what the hell, right?
This is yet another closeup. I took it the same night that I took the other 4 and the black lipstick is PS'd on. But yeah... I think this may be my fav of the bunch. just maybe...
Kinda figured that I should actually critique this as no one else has. I prefer critique rather than someone telling me "nice shot". If it wasn't at all nice, I wouldn't post it duh... anyway, if you would rather that I didn't critique your stuff, just say. I am tracking your work as I see tallented artist in you...
So, to the image...
Shiny black and pearls will always look nice, you managed to recreate the pearl-luminosity on the skin nicely, (pinkish diffuse glow?)... The composition is superb and perfect for this image. Close-ups like this showing things gritted between teeth and near highlighted (major lipstick) sensual lips will always produce sexual tension. Added that the think being toyed with are pearls just addes to this theme.
The focussing is sharp and the DOF is shallow. I particularly like the dark background.
On a note of improvement, I think that I would have prefered to see the top lip in focus also. No big deal but it would have been nice.
I realy love it....just one coment though....the glossy bottom lip and the dull upperlip dont match up, they are both very beautiful, but they dont look like they go together...I think I like the glossy better you have very nice teeth aswell.... that just proves it....all of you is beautiful....very great pictures... love KO
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So, to the image...
Shiny black and pearls will always look nice, you managed to recreate the pearl-luminosity on the skin nicely, (pinkish diffuse glow?)... The composition is superb and perfect for this image. Close-ups like this showing things gritted between teeth and near highlighted (major lipstick) sensual lips will always produce sexual tension. Added that the think being toyed with are pearls just addes to this theme.
The focussing is sharp and the DOF is shallow. I particularly like the dark background.
On a note of improvement, I think that I would have prefered to see the top lip in focus also. No big deal but it would have been nice.
Hope this helps
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